its nice (and now I'M gonna sound really picky >_<) em is it ok for you to remove the colons(:)? they look a bit...awkward also im editing it all to past tense cos the tense was a bit confusing 0_0 and adding typing quirks cos i can :P and actually i was hoping for whatever text to be on the pics(aka like narrative?) and only the part of aradia being dead actually being fic-like BUT ITS OK IGNORE ME ITS NICE FIC:D
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Date: 2012-08-04 02:58 am (UTC)From:(and now I'M gonna sound really picky >_<)
em is it ok for you to remove the colons(:)? they look a bit...awkward
also im editing it all to past tense cos the tense was a bit confusing 0_0 and adding typing quirks cos i can :P
and actually i was hoping for whatever text to be on the pics(aka like narrative?) and only the part of aradia being dead actually being fic-like BUT ITS OK IGNORE ME ITS NICE FIC:D