Here is the text UuU

[zabrainah]

http://www.mediafire.com/file/ofzfvekq8x5v073/HSO_Collab_Round.docx

So if there are some tweaks you notice please tell me so I can fix it!If some of it isn't what you had in mind, tell me! Also if you haven't shown me your pictures yet, can you send me it on tumblr? Like through fanmail? If your pictures are different from the writing, I'll edit the writing so it would match.
I also marked where the pictures would be relevant in the text.


So far I've seen pictures from Bowa,Lizzi, (edit) and Lily! :D


EDIT: If you see some inaccurate stuff that was canon in homestuck, tell me what it is so I can fix that too.

ANOTHER EDIT: IGNORE THE FIRST LINK
Lily saved me the time of editing so here's the new one that's better!:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_VGo-SP6WQIU395otP9QSPF-NTXEQGHC2PmCaizpX18/edit

Comments

[thebowagirl]

i tried to have a look at the text but it wont let me
sais that its owner locked it so its private

[zabrainah]

Whoops! I fixed it UuU

[thebowagirl]

read througth it and it lookes really gr8!
but only one thing i would have liked to change thougth i hope i don't sound to picky but could you replase the "c::::" with ::::)? that way it's more alike what Vriska would use hope thats not being to picky...

[zabrainah]

sure! I don't mind
You don't sound picky at all!

[icylily]

its nice
(and now I'M gonna sound really picky >_<)
em is it ok for you to remove the colons(:)? they look a bit...awkward
also im editing it all to past tense cos the tense was a bit confusing 0_0 and adding typing quirks cos i can :P
and actually i was hoping for whatever text to be on the pics(aka like narrative?) and only the part of aradia being dead actually being fic-like BUT ITS OK IGNORE ME ITS NICE FIC:D

[icylily]

um yeah i edited X_X https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_VGo-SP6WQIU395otP9QSPF-NTXEQGHC2PmCaizpX18/edit

[zabrainah]

It's cool! I sorta knew that there would be a lot of stuff that really need to be edited UuU

[zabrainah]

It actually looks better! And more organized.

I started out doing the quirks but then I realized that it would take forever for me to do that one letter at a time. OvO